Saturday, September 28, 2013

Weekend Writing Warriors

Has another week gone by already? I hope that in the midst of writing and reading you are all getting a chance to enjoy the beautiful fall weather.

This snippet is from Betrothed to Mr. Darcy, my P and P variation which was released on September 18.

This bit is from Mr. Darcy's POV. Enjoy! 




By all logical thought, he ought to have been engaged to Miss Bingley who was genteel and accomplished. Her family, though not of the same status as his, was respectable, and her fortune was not insignificant. Additionally, a marriage with her would have delighted his dear friend Bingley and would have increased the likelihood that Bingley would return the favor and marry his own dear sister, Georgiana, creating a significant and powerful alliance between their two families.
However, if Mr. Darcy had learned anything in recent months it was that love and logic rarely occurred together.
If truth be told, he had been shocked to his very core when he found himself in love with Miss Elizabeth Bennet. He struggled, but his feelings would not be repressed. His admiration and love for her were most ardent.
He looked down at her delicate features, the fine eyes brightened by the exercise of walking the three miles from Longbourn to Netherfield, and his admiration and love grew even more fervent.
Logical thought, and Miss Bingley, be hanged. 


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After a year of misunderstandings, misconceptions and missed opportunities, Miss Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy have finally opened their hearts to each other and will soon be wed.

However, the path to the altar is no smoother than the path to engagement. When the loquacious Mrs. Bennet causes a scene in a London dressmaker’s shop it becomes clear to Lizzy Bennet that she will never be able to rein in her family’s improper and embarrassing behavior.

Although she has learned to live with the humiliation caused by her relatives, particularly her sister Lydia’s elopement with the scurrilous Mr. Wickham, Lizzy realizes the dire consequences of inflicting them upon Mr. Darcy and his vulnerable younger sister, Georgiana.

Mr. Darcy’s words from long ago reverberate in her brain: The situation of your mother's family, though objectionable, was nothing in comparison of that total want of propriety so frequently, so almost uniformly, betrayed by herself, by your three younger sisters, and occasionally even by your father.

Will Elizabeth’s sense of duty, combined with her profound love for Mr. Darcy, force her to call off the wedding in order to spare him, and his sister, the disgrace of a lifetime association with the Bennet family? Or will love find a way to prevail?

13 comments:

  1. Oooh. I do love Mr. Darcy. This sounds really good. :)

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    1. Thank you! It's hard not to love Mr. Darcy.

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  2. I like him a little more with each snippet I read. I'm looking forward to curling up with this story and a good cup of tea!

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  3. Crisp and clean, and a delightful Mr. Darcy!

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    1. Thank you. Mr. Darcy is a pretty crisp sort of guy, isn't he?

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  4. Seems very much the way Mr. Darcy would think! Love this book and today's excerpt was excellent, as always.

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    1. Thank you! You have been such a kind supporter... I can't tell you how much I appreciate it.

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  5. I just finished reading the book, and will probably do a review either November or December for The Pride and Prejudice Challenge. (October's is already scheduled. and it's a bit over-serious.)

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    1. Wonderful! Glad I could be part of your celebration of P and P 200 years!

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  6. Nice to see this from Mr. D's POV. Sounds like a great take on a classic!

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  7. Imagine poor Mr. Darcy stuck with Ms. Bingley! He'd be miserable.

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  8. A lovely retelling of that moment.

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